The way you begin an email with the recruiter can actually set the tone for everything! Writing an engaging and professional intro is very important to have that hook.
Professional email address: Before even starting on the composition of your email, make sure it comes from a professional soundingemail address. Preferably Prevalent Domain — john. doe@aappaattu (along these lines, Sample.com) Never use nicknames or casual greetings as this can end up leaving a bad impression.
And is the subject line — this is your only way to grab them and get that foot in, so. make it good. Clearly define your email. Keep concise and focus on why you are reaching out in the first place.
This is a glimpse of my career in Software Development
Senior Analyst Position Application Follow-Up”.
A subject line reveal the summary of your email to a recruiter.
Start with a polite greeting
Start your email with an appropriate and professional greeting. Use the recruiter’s name if you know it. For example:
“Dear Ms. Smith,”
“Hello Mr. Johnson,”
If you do not know the recruiter’s name, then use a general greeting line like this:
“Dear Hiring Team,”
“Hello Recruiter,”
using over-casual greetings such as ‘Hey’ or ‘Hi there’, which can peer unprofessional
Introduce yourself clearly
At the start of your email give a brief introduction. Introduce your name and current role as well say where you saw the job listing or how you learned about the recruiter. For instance:
I am a Sr. Graphic designer having more than 5 years of professional experience, My name is Sarah Brown. Just saw your job posting for a Graphic Designer at XYZ Company on LinkedIn.
The power of this introduction is that you are setting the tone, and providing extra context to the recruiter so they know who it is reaching out to them.
When you do finally get to an introduction, follow with a clear statement of what the email is all about.
Clarity around what you are after, allows the recruiter to immediately adjust their hat on how they can help you.
If someone has referred you to the recruiter or if you have a connection with the company mention that in your opening. Try and create a personal connection to your reader in some way, anything that makes YOUR MESSAGE standout.
Through the grapevine Type: John Doe recommended that I contact you because of your need for seasoned project managers.
“Following your new project, as heard of at the recent tech conference I attended.”
Be brief and professional
This should be brief and to the point, keep it in a professional language. Do not include a lot of details in the first lines; detail should be kept for email body. What you want to do (nudge nudge wink wink) with your opening is grab the recruiters’ attention and make them want to read on.
Example opening paragraphs
Here are a couple of examples to describe:
“Hi Mr Brown, I trust you are well and safe during these demanding times. Hello Emily Davis, I just wanted to inquire if there are any possible opportunities for your marketing team whatever position. Lisa Green recommended I get in touch with you as she has pointed out that your business is growing its digital marketing division.

Finish with a Professional Sign-Off
Conclude Your Email With A Professional Closing Common sign-offs include:
“Best regards,”
“Sincerely,”
“Thank you,”
Finally, remember to always review your email for any typos or grammatical mistakes before you press send. A professionally sent error-free email shows care, as well.
When beginning an email to a recruiter, it is crucial that you toe the line between both professionalism and clarity. If your opening is very brief yet also pertinent to the job on offer, you are likely making a good impression and thus catching the eye of said recruiter. Make sure your greeting is polite to the point, and that you remain professional throughout. Hopefully, these tips will better help you connect with a recruiter so that you can stop making excuses and start getting interviews!